Friday, September 7, 2012

My Name c:

There are many  different types of people in the world, there are introverted people, extroverted people, doleful people, rambunctious people, and even buffoons, but without our names people wouldn't be able to acknowledge us for who we are. My name is very important to me, I love my name. I would never want to change it. The only thing I don't like about the name is, the name "Jacob"  is common to have for people my age, I don't quite understand why, but it's true. So what I'm trying to say is, I love my name like the sun loves shinning and even if I could, I wouldn't change anything about it. Me loving my name is just making me a tad bit more conceited than I would be if i didn't have my name, so that being said, you all should find reasons to love your name and stop being the doleful person or the rambunctious person, or even the buffoon because your name is going to be with you for a long time. Embrace the fact that, that's you.

20 comments:

  1. I liked how you used your vocab terms. Nice job.

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  2. I like how you actually like your name a lot people don't like there nam

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  3. I love how you basically said our name makes us, us :)

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  4. I love the title! And I love how you put a lot of positive energy in this!

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  5. Jacob,
    If you could pick a new name, what would it be?

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    1. It would definitely be Vasi's patented 'Jake the Snake' .

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  6. Welll well well..... I find this rather amusing to be quite honest

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  7. Good job bud! :D very poetic like, I feel like it is a quote from a famous person almost!

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  8. I like that you expanded upon the prompt and shied how it applies to all of us, not just yourself.

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  9. I liked how your explanation got right to the point of what your writing was about.

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  10. I like how well writen this was. Great job!

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  11. Jacob,
    I love how you said thatbyou should learn to love your name because that is going to be with you for a long time. I didn't like my name for a long time but you get over it. GOOD JOB!!!

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  12. Great job! I loved the ending where you said your name will be with you for a long time, so learn to love it. So true! I enjoyed it, well done (:

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  13. I like the fact that you love your name and no that you are conceded. Lol and I didn't no that's how you spell your last name

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  14. I love how u went straight to the point and didn't explain your name

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